I will respond when I have a little more time, being as I've done the layout since November
Should also say we are always open to positive criticism
Theft wrote:
In what sense do you think the format could be better?
The layout? articles? style?Theft, if you've already read this, its been edited it a couple of times as stuff has been picked up and more thought has gone into it.
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I like the article content for the most part, although being an anarchist and reading an anarchist news paper will give a different picture than anyone else picking up Resist!.
In general, the layout just doesn't feel right to read.
The pictures are placed in a style that makes it feel disjointed to read articles, not good. Clearly pixelled pic on the front of the current issue, personnally, i'd reduce the size or something to try and make it less apparent.
The front page header feels old and out of proportion compared with other papers, it must be about 1/4 of the page and appears grainy, therefore outdated to me vs. other papers.
The 3 column layout pretty much continuously, with articles arranged one below the other, and no deviancy in layout isn't particularly engaging. The headlines on each article must cost alot of space too (either side blank).
Articles with pictures placed below those without pictures and general inconsistencies that make the pictures feel wasted and just thrown in.
The font seems overly big too; compare it to the back page which feels alot better to read (although i'm a young person with good eye sight).
Some of the articles have sentences that could be improved, and in some cases shortened. If there was a reduction in spacing underneath/ above lines, font and some editing out of what i see as very elongated sentences, there might even be a page free to put in events/ letters or something else other than news.
Front page should always be something people care about. People will pick up stuff about the NHS, not so much stuff that we think is interesting. It should always be relevant to the audience. Same with the rest of the paper, it's very anarchisty with not alot of appeal to non-anarchists, at least that's my opinion.
In general there's a feeling reading it that the articles have been composed, then put into a template with no editing or thoughts of how it reads. I'm sure this isn't the case, but it feels that way to read.
Sorry, i don't mean to moan or anything, just some things that really stick out and could really do with fixing to improve Resist!
Raw's fairly involved I think, if he's knocking about he might comment at some point. As I understand it they're from the autonomist tradition, but not quite at formal launch stage yet. There was a short thread about them here.